Poem: The Mysterious Presentation | brutmystik's Blog

The Mysterious Presentation:

 

 

I have looked

Into the monuments

Waking, moving

To reject our

Loving reflections.

 

I felt it in debit cards,

Washingtons, and Franklins.

 

Receiving understanding,

I have seen it

In the church railing

And company banners-

A weird inscription with

No words but only

A mysterious presentation.

 

 


Posted by BrutMystik at 00:50 on November 6th, 2009 at 12:50AM (updated Nov 6th, 2009)  
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gilgamesh18
Posted on 07:05PM on Nov 9th, 2009
This is breathtaking. I love the first three lines of the second stanza.
BrutMystik
Posted on 10:17AM on Nov 11th, 2009
Thank you, gilgamesh :-P I am very fond of this poem.
snowbunny1002
Posted on 10:24AM on Nov 11th, 2009
I love this Brutmystik! The first 5 lines got me :)....
BrutMystik
Posted on 10:31AM on Nov 11th, 2009
Thank you, snow. I was thinking there are things that strike me as having a hidden message...
snowbunny1002
Posted on 10:40AM on Nov 11th, 2009
I love hidden messages in the truth..it makes me think.
BrutMystik
Posted on 10:46AM on Nov 11th, 2009
Exactly.
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