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Villains Speech At The Saw Mill:

 

 Your eyes

Made a contract

With me to be focused,

Honest and sweet

To every part of me

You should meet,

Trick or treat.

 

In a disappearing dress

You’ll rest-

Finally wedding-

Soon pushing up weeds

With your flattened loin

Wearing a veil of thorns.

 

You have seen

Passion as a flaw-

But moments from now

The claw of devotion

Will rock you to sleep.

 

Your soul

Inherited a doll frame

And wings attached

To me,

Dear-

 


Posted by BrutMystik at 13:55 on August 27th, 2009 at 1:55PM (updated Aug 27th, 2009)  
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MadMaximus
Posted on 02:03PM on Aug 27th, 2009
In each line, a new idea for a story. I'm going to have to dissect this. The word sawmill is like a fading memory that cries out to me from the springtime of youth. A dangerous and mechanical place. I digress.
anyod
Posted on 02:07PM on Aug 27th, 2009
i like it...it`s like describing the whole life..in just few verses...well it`s so shot but intense
BrutMystik
Posted on 02:49PM on Aug 27th, 2009
Thank you both-I appreciate the comments more than you know...so few people really do, and I treasure it each time, and, I value your opinions. I am illustrating them also. My friend Chris was the one who brought this collectively unconscious female experience to the forefront of my mind-those old cartoons.
BrutMystik
Posted on 08:40PM on Aug 28th, 2009
I know...I can have some scary moments...but this is a cartoon, remember... ;-B
BrutMystik
Posted on 09:06PM on Aug 29th, 2009
Thanks Mr. GrnJeans! How did you know I like carrots? I would love to expand the story...we'll see how it goes...Thank you for the treats, and your kind encouragement...have a great night.
Lilt
Posted on 09:40PM on Aug 29th, 2009
Don't you just love how everyone comes away from your work with so many questions and emotions? Such a gift you have, BrutMystik. Have you given anymore thought to reading your poems ?
BrutMystik
Posted on 10:04PM on Aug 29th, 2009
It has been suggested to me, Lilt. I do love that instillation.
marcus101
Posted on 10:18PM on Aug 29th, 2009
...flattened loins, veils of thorns, oh my! :)
BrutMystik
Posted on 10:29PM on Aug 29th, 2009
Yeah...the poem is certainly pregnant with symbolism. My friend Chris wants to sculpt that line (in a kinetic sculpture). I can only imagine what it would look like. What do you think that line is about, Marcus?
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