Poem: Epic Note | brutmystik's Blog


Epic Note

 

 

Please excuse the

Tightness in my throat,

I am channeling an epic note:

In the simplest terms, with

The dearest description I

Must inform you there is

No velvet prescription for

Jew, Muslim, Buddhist, Hindu,

Atheist or Christian.

 

We are all learning, visiting-

Be a crusader for everyone

Or nothing. Here are some questions

I have always been considering…

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


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Posted on 01:33PM on May 28th, 2009
You are the finest poet on this site....
Posted on 01:39PM on May 28th, 2009
Thank you Peace On Earth. Thank you for your support and wonderful words of encouragement my friend.
Posted on 01:41PM on May 28th, 2009
I wish I could do this. Express myself like this. Very nice, Brut.
Posted on 01:49PM on May 28th, 2009
Interesting. I love you Brut. Great writing. As usual... I don't have your answers. I am a Christian. But I think many of your questions can be answered in man's view of God and not His plan. The universe is so much bigger than just 'us'. God isn't about power and control, I know that much. We have that old testament legacy of legalism hanging on and I'm not even sure why it existed in the beginning. I, too, struggle with your questions. But, it doesn't turn me on God, just makes me wish I could get an answer from Him. Once again, I love you woman.
Posted on 01:53PM on May 28th, 2009
Thank you Friends, for your wonderful compliments...thank you from the bottom of my heart. TF, you are right. *Do ya really love me, really, really?*
Posted on 02:01PM on May 28th, 2009
I agree thats very good :)
Posted on 02:02PM on May 28th, 2009
I LOVE the introductory 2 stanzas to this poem. The questions are truly thought provoking for anyone but put forth in such a creative way. Thanks for sharing this.
Posted on 02:07PM on May 28th, 2009
You ask questions in this poem that I have asked myself! Beautifully expressed!
Posted on 02:11PM on May 28th, 2009
Poem, or polemic? Either way, powerful,
Posted on 02:21PM on May 28th, 2009
Amazing as always. :)
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